Too loud, and distorted.
The first thing I'll say is that the note progression was nice, and I enjoyed the sound of some of the instruments, as well as the ambient break in the middle (explained further below).
The first thing that I noticed was the incredible volume of the voice, and the beginning instrument-thing, and as I'm listening on, the entire song is very loud. There doesn't seem to be any, or hardly any low-end sounds, and the entire piece sounds a little bit too distorted. When it went into the break with the ambient sounds, it was a pleasant break from the loud distorted sound, until the lady's voice came in, which was again, far too loud.
I have no idea if the original song was like this or not, but it's just a little bit too abrasive for my liking. I'm sure some people would like it far more than me, and hopefully they'll come and listen to this song.